Tuesday, October 15, 2019

Monday, October 21 writing a restaurant review


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Learning targets: 11-12W1: I can write arguments to support claims that analyze substantive topics or texts, using valid reasoning and relevant and sufficient evidence.
11-12SL4: I can present claims, findings, and supporting evidence, conveying a clear and distinct perspective; alternative or opposing perspectives are addressed; organization, development, substance, and style are appropriate to task, purpose, and audience.
              
Due at the close of class on Monday, October 21
What will you turn in?
1) Exercise 2: (class handout / copy below)
2) Your personal dining chart from the restauant you selected
3) Your review: 1. length 300 words
                           2. follows the information in "how to put it all together"
                           3. must include article title
                           4. your name as the critic
                           5. two images
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REVIEW ONE
Tables for Two
At Mo’s Original, It Pays to Be Open-Minded
In Prospect-Lefferts Gardens, a pair of talented chefs have found success in the unexpected intersection of Caribbean food and ramen noodles.
By Hannah Goldfield
In Prospect-Lefferts Gardens, a neighborhood with a large Caribbean population and a lot of Caribbean restaurants, Mo’s stands out by finding the intersection of Jamaican and Japanese food.
Photograph by Makeda Sandford for The New Yorker




The story of Mo’s Original, a new restaurant in Brooklyn, involves a few false starts. First, there was Glady’s, an eclectic sandwich shop opened in Crown Heights, in 2013, by Michael Jacober, a chef and grilled-cheese-truck impresario. The sandwiches were excitingly unusual, but after a few months Jacober, feeling like an interloper in the neighborhood, decided to rebrand as a Caribbean restaurant, focussing on Jamaican-style jerk to better serve the local community. If this was pandering, it was in good faith—Jacober travelled around Jamaica to educate himself and found a partner in one of his sous-chefs, Junior Felix, a native of St. Lucia—and it worked; in 2016, they expanded to a second, bigger location, in Prospect-Lefferts Gardens.
The menu showcases several varieties of ramen, including one made with a vegan mushroom broth, fried tofu, and smoked cherry tomatoes (left) and a spicy miso-curry iteration (right) with a rich, creamy chicken broth and smoked chicken.Photograph by Makeda Sandford for The New Yorker
In these new digs, however, Glady’s didn’t quite take. And so, in May, Felix, with a new partner, William (Mo) Garfield, a onetime collaborator with Jacober (who recently divested from both places), decided to rebrand, as a Caribbean-ramen restaurant. If this sounds to you, as it did to me, like an outlandishly misguided and even lazily of-the-moment idea: I’m happy to report that it pays to be more open-minded. Garfield and Felix are not trend-chasing hacks but, rather, skilled chefs who have found the intersection of their passions. Garfield, originally from Portland, Maine, and a veteran of Japanese restaurants, is a devoted student of ramen; Felix is fluent in Caribbean flavors and a master of the custom smoker that he and Jacober designed for Glady’s, which burns American maple and ash wood in addition to traditional Jamaican pimento chips.
The bar serves beers on tap, sake, and tiki-style cocktails, plus a house-made yuzu lemonade.      Photograph by Makeda Sandford for The New Yorker
The success of Mo’s is best exemplified by the spicy miso-curry ramen. Curry is Caribbean, curry is Japanese, curry is fantastic when added in balanced proportion to an incredibly rich chicken broth, which is so thick with miso that it’s almost a sauce. Golden and creamy, it’s a perfect base for a tangle of thick-cut wavy noodles and generous curls of succulent smoked chicken thigh, nestled with charred cabbage and carrots and topped with wisps of scallion, garlic oil, and a house-made togarashi spice mixture.
The “smoke” ramen, made with both smoked-chicken broth and shreds of smoked pork loin, would be my second choice, and, in the mushroom-broth ramen, the three-dimensional flavor of the sweet smoked cherry tomatoes alone makes that dish worth ordering. (The latter is vegan, and the kitchen is unusually accommodating of dietary restrictions, using only wheat-free tamari in lieu of regular soy sauce and offering to substitute rice noodles in any ramen.)
But the menu goes far beyond noodles. Dinner begins with complimentary baskets of freshly made, copper-hued potato chips sprinkled with togarashi. Appetizers include crunchy tater tots topped with eel sauce, aioli, and bonito flakes; fried Brussels sprouts with vegan fish sauce (made with seaweed and mushrooms); and plump bao buns filled with sweet-and-sour pickles and meaty-textured deep-fried tofu. A “big salad” features frilly-tendrilled mixed greens that taste like they came from the farmers’ market as opposed to a plastic clamshell, tossed with carrots, daikon, hemp seeds, almonds, and herbs in an oniony dressing. The smoked chicken and pork loin are available barbecue style, too, and, to really please the crowds, there’s a burger—with two beef patties—plus a veggie “burger” (actually a smoked portobello cap).
A few months in, Mo’s has some kinks to iron out. On several recent evenings, the kitchen had run out of a good third of its offerings, and delicious-sounding specials, though prominently advertised, have been elusive; I’ve been chasing the smoked lobster with corn for weeks. I was sorry to see a dish of excellent head-on shrimp grilled in soy and ginger replaced by one with shrimp breaded and fried, and to be served a plate of tamari-brined fried chicken that was just shy of inedibly burnt. With a few tweaks, Mo’s could end its Goldilocks-like journey and feel exactly right. (Dishes $5-$15.)

♦Review 2


Keith McNally’s meatpacking-district destination once had a sexy edge, but now it seems merely to blend in.
The other night, at the recently rebooted Pastis, a server who had just shouted “Sock it to me!” while taking my table’s dinner order leaned in conspiratorially. Lowering his voice to a near-whisper, he said, haltingly, “And—are we having bread?” Of course we were having bread, my companions and I sputtered. Did we look like no-bread people? His expression turned sheepish. “I just moved from Los Angeles, the no-bread capital of the world,” he explained.
Pastis is named for pastis, an anise-flavored apéritif usually mixed with water and ice before serving. Photograph by Vanessa Granda for The New Yorker

In fairness, Pastis is the sort of place that attracts plenty of no-bread people, not to mention no-dairy people and no-sugar people. When the original Pastis opened, in 1999, in the meatpacking district, it became one of the Midas-like restaurateur Keith McNally’s most golden establishments, where the food, though more than serviceable, was not really the point. A convincing replica of an elegantly understated Parisian brasserie, it was, first and foremost, a hangout for A-listers like Sarah Jessica Parker and the Olsen twins, and a means for commoners to brush shoulders with them while spending lavishly for the privilege.
Pastis ratified the transformation of the neighborhood from industrial to industrial chic. In 2014, it closed, after the building that housed it was slated for major construction and the rent tripled; it was eventually replaced by a Restoration Hardware, one of the many luxury chains that have lent the area the feel of an open-air mall. This past June, McNally reopened it, in partnership with the flashy restaurateur Stephen Starr, in a new location a few blocks away.
Sticking with classics, such as steak tartare, is the best way to have a joyful meal here.Photograph by Vanessa Granda for The New Yorker
This dining room is very similar to the old one: café chairs, marble tables, and ruddy leather banquettes; white subway tiles and tin ceilings; distressed mirrors glowing in the halogen light. (The shelves of cigarette packs are long gone. Overheard at breakfast: “I’m listening to you, but I’m also going to pick my Juul up off the floor.”) The no-bread people, donning Cartier bracelets and Louis Vuitton-print shifts, have come rushing back; in recent weeks, it’s been nearly impossible to get a table for dinner at a reasonable hour, and even at lunchtime on a Tuesday in the dead of August there was a thirty-minute wait. On that Tuesday, some celebrities had returned, too: the performer Sandra Bernhard walked out with the former Vogue editor André Leon Talley; the chef and Food Network host Anne Burrell posed for photographs.
On one visit, frites were crisp and as coarsely salted as an icy highway in February; on another, they were considerably more limp but only marginally less enjoyable, accompanying plump mussels in an extra-buttery white-wine broth and a brawny hanger steak carved into juicy slices. Frites are a must, as are smashed pommes at breakfast. At a moment when New York’s French restaurants can feel exhaustingly ambitious, there’s something refreshing about revelling in plain potatoes. And do not forgo the bread, which, like the morning Viennoiseries (croissants, pain au chocolat, brioche), comes from McNally’s Balthazar Bakery. It’s a perfectly chewy, tangy pain au levain, served with tubs of whipped butter. Life is too short to be a no-bread person. (Entrées $17-$59.)


Exercise 1: with a partner
 Make a list of the restaurant qualities that attract you to a restaurant.

 Make another list of qualities that you don’t like.

 Good Qualities                                Negative Qualities
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Exercise 2: Based upon the two reviews above, fill in the Restaurant Data Charts below. (class handouts) To be collected as class participation grades


Your Name_______________________________-Restaurant Review Data Sheet
 Name of Restaurant_____________________________________________
Location



Menu



Type of restaurant



Price



Clientele



Atmosphere



Reputation



Food Quality



Service



Your experience










Your Name_______________________________-Restaurant Review Data Sheet
 Name of Restaurant_____________________________________________
Location



Menu



Type of restaurant



Price



Clientele



Atmosphere



Reputation



Food Quality



Service



Your experience










How to put this all together for your own review




1.      Begin with a general statement that mentions the restaurant’s name and location.
2.       It is also possible to begin with a “hook” and then provide specifics about the restaurant. (A hook is the first sentence or two of a review. The purpose of a hook is to grab the reader’s attention.)
3.       Food – Describe the food on the menu in detail. You can mention a particular dish that you have had there, if you think it is appropriate.
4.       Atmosphere – Discuss the exterior and interior décor. Also mention the ambience, background music and special features of the restaurant.
5.       Service – Some reviews may give details about the service from the first moment a customer enters the restaurant until the customer has finished the meal and leaves. It is okay to mention the name of a server or chef that is exceptionally friendly, helpful or talented.
6.       Clientele – Mention what type of people like to go there. Is there a dress code?
7.       Price – It is important to mention the general price range; however, specifics are not necessary. A “hint” about whether the place is expensive or cheap may be adequate.
8.      Location – Is the restaurant hard to find?
9.      Other details – Do customers need reservations? What are the hours? Is it crowded on weekends?
10.   The “Bottom Line” – Overall Conclusion. Make a couple of final comments and give the restaurant some type of “score” that will help other people decide whether they want to go there or not.
11.   Provide the address and telephone number at the bottom of the review.





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